Dragon slayers

This book's author is Kate McMullan

Wiglaf and his friends had to go on a school holiday.  On their way through the they had a lot of trouble going through the forests.  They had a map to get to the DSA they had had to go through the dang. Wiglafs heart was beating fast.  The light was dim, the sun’s ray’s could not pass through dangerous palces in the world. The went to the dark forest. The light was dim, It had  crooked branches.

  The bushes looked scary. Wiglaf and his friends were approaching Gorzil’s cave.  Angus ran towards the cave and tripped and his knee was bledding  badly.

  I liked the way the author explained to show and tell.  He also told it in scenes.

 Dragon slayers

Wiglaf and his friends had to go on a school holiday.  On their way through the they had a lot of trouble going through the forests.  They had a map to get to the DSA they had had to go through the dangerous places in the world.  They went to the dark forest. Wiglafs heart was beating fast.  The light was dim, the sun’s ray’s could not pass through the crooked branches.

  The bushes looked scary. Wiglaf and his friends were approaching Gorzil’s cave.  Angus ran towards the cave and tripped and his knee was bledding  badly.

  I liked the way the author explained to show and tell.  He also told it in scenes.