The most important part of writing is showing not telling.Another way I use is showing.I do not tell.Suppose,you show what character is feeling like not telling that he is happy.
This is an example to explain how to show not tell:
He is happy to go to India.This is telling.
As he heard his mother say that we were going to India,he jumped and did a cartwheel.This is showing.
When you are writing always remember to show the characters feelings.
Advay, this is fantastic! I love how you connected your learning at home and reflected on how to write by showing not telling. Fabulous job. I wonder if you could start putting some of your writing pieces on this blog for us all to read. A blog is great because you have a larger audience! Thanks for taking this initiative.
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Hi Advay! This is so good, and I am so proud of you...Let me try and use what you have taught me about showing not telling.
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Showing: As i opened the web page, i found myself scrolling and wanting to read more and more. As i reached the end of the page, i gave myself a mental hi-five, and ran to give you a pat on the back.
Good working on showing not telling
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